Oh, revisions. I'm still revising, and I probably will continue revising until the actial due date of this darn paper. This is so much fun!
I took the charming letter that I recieved last class into much consideration while making changes to my paper. Some suggestions were made about my chronology, word choice and literary techniques that I tried to add. I changed the order of some things so that the chronology of the thing wasn't quite so confusing. Some awkward sounding words were changes, paragraphs were moved around and/or deleted, and sentences were added. Overall, I'm much happier with the flow of the paper and I think everything fits together more cohesively than it did before! I still don't have an ending. It would probably be good to get one of those soon.
Oh my gosh I just finished my ending. It's so good. Yay closure.
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