Lorca gives Bride a strong aversion to elements of adult life, such as marriage and sex, to show that she is an immature girl who is not prepared for marriage.
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4- only because I didn't notice this in the book, I'm assuming you have though! 5- never thought of it 4- fairly clear,I just don't know what you're referring to because I didn't notice it in the book
Accuracy: 5 (I'd have to look back in the book)
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4- only because I didn't notice this in the book, I'm assuming you have though!
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4- fairly clear,I just don't know what you're referring to because I didn't notice it in the book
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Very good topic sentence
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